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Nicely done. What's with all the school projects? I never like loops by the way, but good job :)
Pros- A school movie! Enjoy it, it's not educational. Sound too.
Cons- Loop, no preloader, no music (who cares?) Not really Newgrounds material. But good for school!
Improvement (opinion only)-
*Yeah, I got nothin', I would've failed so you've got my full support on an A+ for that :)
Author's Response:
ah. yeah I always forget to put in the stop action... stupid me, I'll remember for the next one I upload, and hopefully get the pre-loader figured out for it as well.
heh thanks for the A+ :)
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Not going to rate or review this, because I had trouble loading the game. The size is only hovering around 700kb, which shouldn't take long with my connection. I'm an impatient person though :) It never loaded for the time I gave it...perhaps a bug? Or in heavy need of a pre-loader? Send me a message when it works again and I'll try & rate it :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I've noticed that myself, but the people I showed it to before uploading had no problems, so I thought it was just me. The next release will have a preloader ;D
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"Nicely done, I see dolphin fans all over ya :)"
A nice addition to Newgrounds, and could be an awsome game in the future. This is what Newgrounds is all about though, giving flash creators like you a chance to be flash artists.
Pros- Full on interactive, buttons and all. Keeps you busy for a short time. A nice time-killer for the younger audience. Even features mini-games, random updates, and requires the users attention. Static game so time isn't against you. (i.e you choose when the day ends)
Cons- Interactivity isn't stretched out too far. Doesn't have many choices as far as caring for the dolphin. Graphics arn't smooth (flips look like paper :) ). Needs massive updates, but they're slowly coming.
Improvement (opinion only)-
*Update the graphics or find an artist for hire :)
*Keep the updates coming! They're what make a good game better.
*Add more mini-games, possibly things to buy (with chosen currency..maybe from mini-games)
*Add a choice of treats or food for different rewards
*Add real-time to the game, more challenging and fun when you have to keep up with it. (optional..)
I'm the kind of guy who's a flash bumm..I just rate yours and others to my opinion, put them all together :) I want to see what you come up with. Good luck.
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