Score: 6

"Good luck man.."

submission: Public Transportation

date: March 29, 2008

Nicely done. What's with all the school projects? I never like loops by the way, but good job :)

Pros- A school movie! Enjoy it, it's not educational. Sound too.

Cons- Loop, no preloader, no music (who cares?) Not really Newgrounds material. But good for school!

Improvement (opinion only)-

*Yeah, I got nothin', I would've failed so you've got my full support on an A+ for that :)

Score: 0

"Problem?"

submission: Fog

date: March 29, 2008

Not going to rate or review this, because I had trouble loading the game. The size is only hovering around 700kb, which shouldn't take long with my connection. I'm an impatient person though :) It never loaded for the time I gave it...perhaps a bug? Or in heavy need of a pre-loader? Send me a message when it works again and I'll try & rate it :)

Score: 6

"Nicely done, I see dolphin fans all over ya :)"

submission: Pet dolphin

date: March 25, 2008

A nice addition to Newgrounds, and could be an awsome game in the future. This is what Newgrounds is all about though, giving flash creators like you a chance to be flash artists.

Pros- Full on interactive, buttons and all. Keeps you busy for a short time. A nice time-killer for the younger audience. Even features mini-games, random updates, and requires the users attention. Static game so time isn't against you. (i.e you choose when the day ends)

Cons- Interactivity isn't stretched out too far. Doesn't have many choices as far as caring for the dolphin. Graphics arn't smooth (flips look like paper :) ). Needs massive updates, but they're slowly coming.

Improvement (opinion only)-

*Update the graphics or find an artist for hire :)
*Keep the updates coming! They're what make a good game better.
*Add more mini-games, possibly things to buy (with chosen currency..maybe from mini-games)
*Add a choice of treats or food for different rewards
*Add real-time to the game, more challenging and fun when you have to keep up with it. (optional..)

I'm the kind of guy who's a flash bumm..I just rate yours and others to my opinion, put them all together :) I want to see what you come up with. Good luck.

Score: 7

"It's simple, I like it :)"

submission: Simple button Masher v1.5

date: March 24, 2008

Perfect for frustrated people! That thing kept me busy for a whole 30 seconds...my highscore is 69 :) Damn right..

Pros- Again, perfect for those people who need a stress reliever..TAKE IT OUT ON YOUR MOUSE ! It's great for those of you who don't know how to give up and lose and just keep trying for that score of 1000 :) (btw if anyone gets over 500, message me after you record it, I want to see...) Even though it's short and simple, I bet alot of people will be addicted to it.

Cons- So short, so simple...if you're a happy person with not a care in the world...don't play this..your view of the world will turn around and you'll be killing rodents for the rest of your life (there's not alot to this game, only clicking a button)

Improvement (opinion only)-

*Music with off option
*Highscore table for all users (so we can smack people with auto-clickers)
*Animations, witty lines during game, be creative

I love these kinds of games...good luck.

Score: 8

"I've seen this..in restaurants!"

submission: Solitary

date: March 17, 2008

This is a great puzzle game..I've played it in rl and on internet alot. But this has a nice unique style to it, here's the review-

Pros- A nice puzzle game, very well known for most people I'm sure, so lots of Newgrounders shouldn't have a problem learning the basic and gettin' comfortable with the game, so no tutorial needed.

Cons- Simple game, once you beat it or get bored, you're done. Nothing special too it. Gets really old, really fast, if you've played anything like it before too.

Improvement (opinion only)-

*Timed mode.
*Score system (ranks, etc.)
*End game (Once you're out of moves, change screen to rank and possibly a witty sentence or two :)

Score: 6

"Nice interactive movie!"

submission: Dbz a Different Path

date: March 16, 2008

I don't really follow DBZ except for games =/ But from what I seen, thats a pretty good movie, even interactive.

Pros- Interactive- you click, it happens. You don't need to wait or speed-read for the next conversation. Full of action, and not bad graphics considering its a 3-5 min movie. Easy to understand even if you don't follow the actual show.

Cons- Unfinished. Long enough..but I need something to Con about ;) Graphics arn't the best, resembles pixel drawings ;)

Improvement (opinion only)-

*I figure graphics are the best they'll get without lookin like a 2 year old drew them..or me :) So that doesn't seem to need improvement..but go for it if you're an artist
*Add to it, continue this and throw in a sequel, if Newgrounds likes it
*Keep the story going down a different path, away from the actual show..Newgrounds doesn't want to see what it already seen on T.V =P

Score: 9

"Not like every defense game, I like it."

submission: Knights Castle

date: March 12, 2008

I like the cooldowns over mp :) Mp's always a pain to gain, and hard to use. And the selection of spells is nice

Pros- Cooldown on spells, not MP. Allows unlimited use if you have patience. Attack is nicely done, and enemies range from easy to hard. Defend the castle, with a unit!

Cons- Only 2 spec trees for spells. Only way to regain HP is to use the spell heal (I believe..I might be wrong) Time is short before waves, but who needs time ? ;)

Improvement (opinion only)-

*Add more spec trees/spells
*More unit types
*Different difficulties or modes

Score: 8

"Good interaction!"

submission: Death Row

date: March 12, 2008

I like these types of interactions, but I've yet to win it. I don't have much time, which really sucks when I have to start over, but with that short of a game I'm not complaining to much =P

Pros- A good interaction, and challenging, and a fun use of time :) If you like caring for virtual people more than yourself, this is a great game for you! Includes a chat bot for you to communicate with the prisoner :)

Cons- Short game, no time to enjoy the many buttons of the game, push them and hope you do something right.

Improvement (opinion only)-

*Different modes?
*Longer days (as an option)

Score: 4

"Nice school project!"

submission: Asteroid

date: March 12, 2008

Looks like something I would make ;) I'm 15 too with no artistic skill..AT ALL.

I like it :) Lemee guess..the hand pushing the button for launch..must've belonged to Bush right? It missed =/

I see an A+ comin' your way ;)

Score: 5

"A good lunch-time game :)"

submission: Hit 'n' Run

date: March 12, 2008

This is a great mini-game for people in need of a time killer at work or school.

Pros- Great time killer, doesn't require much time, and theres no stress in pushing that X button if you need to run. Easy to get into and out of ;) I also like the different power-ups the game provides ;)

Cons- That range of how far the cars can be and still hit you is amazing (no you really should fix that :) the range is too close, its no head-on its next-to) and for those who really get into the high-scores..don't play this, it takes a while to rake in numbers, it seems like only a mini-game :)

Improvement (opinion only)-

*Add custom cars (or car upgrades possibly every couple levels using points as currency)
*More traffic each level
*Different animations for people/oncoming traffic..(not everyone buys a white car...)

I'm still trying to get over the fact of how many people have a death wish of walking in the middle of such a busy street..thats like me without the death wish ..but great game! :)